This isn't too bad...
This isn't too bad for your second flash :) You included a preloader and a replay button which are the main things a flash movie needs ^_^ You probably soon will be good at this if you practise a lot and try out new stuff ^_^
Thanks bro (or bro-ette if you have a uterus).
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